Saturday, April 12, 2008
tune up --
back!
from a SUPER GRUELLING JACOBSAMLAROSE THING!
this poet is a britise guyanese pappadum poetry supremo. and i really thank him for helping me improve(?) my poetry. perhaps i improved lah. but then again i look at anurak (clinging unto these mortal bounds that are oh so humannnn), camila (dun wanna say already, even her sparrow and lark poem is so pwnage), austin (leaving me at the door screaming for my own culture), geoffrey (caesar's equal majesty WAH CHIM CHIM), joshua (fourty four) lots of people lah. purple hummingbirds and green droplets.
Lets just say that my poetry sucks compared to all of them and its great they actually accomodated my stupidities. its really really demoralizing when AIYAH when everybody but you writes such emocheem poetry and can spam it whenever they like! gah i'm hopeless at that. maybe i should learn how to copy people's phrases and words used.
But actually young poets love to use the same words over and over again. like take for example the word "souls." its like when you have a choice of words to use like hearts, spirits or souls, you would DEFINITELY SET YOUR HEART ON SOUL.
that sounded cheem. anyway was talking to hsien about chemistry topics, or my brain's lack of the knowledge of.
but then again she was totally crazy. YES HSIEN YOU WERE TOTALLY CRAZY WHAT POSTER BROCHURE. I DUNNO WHAT YOU TALK ABOUT LAH!
yeah apart from soul there are all the descriptors of beach, like sunset. ANYTHING LAH I NEED TO UM DO MY CHEMISTRY ALREADY LAH LETS MSN IF YOU WANNA KNOW MORE.
and lol links ah. i too lazy. I WOULD DO IT SOMEDAY LAH (((((:
dead blog revived mahmann.
Mike
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